This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
On Thursday I went to Spencer park for a school trip. I played in the playground on the see saw with Ethan. Ethan was stuck up in the air. It was very funny.
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hi Zane hope your work is fun. I like your picture. It was funny when I was up in the air.
ReplyDeleteYou were stuck Because i am very strong. I think it was funny.
Deletei was Stuck In the air and but I did not care
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