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Friday 31 August 2018

My Disgusting Dinner writing

In literacy we have been writing about disgusting dinner. we had to make up a disgusting dinner story using lots of adjectives. I found it hard to think of different disgusting foods. I liked the dog poo pikelets the best.We published our stories on our chomebooks in the end. I hope you like my disgusting dinner. what would you like in your disgusting dinner?
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  1. Anonymous10:00 am, November 02, 2018

    I like the way you used lots of describing words in your poem . Especially the dirty dog poo . It made me thinks about the time I ate something yucky and it nearly made me sick . Did you get anyone to hlep you ?

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